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高塔 2015

拧酒杯的耳朵
赏不仁不义几个巴掌,骂道,薄幸
世说新语,惑人,溺人
三国,荀奉倩
爱他的妻子
松针妄度雪深
抚冬天的额,要命
冻躯取冷
以夫身熨妻身
同行的路上,不单行
谁一顾一视,指指点点?
总不成,任妻早醒
夫犹自,作梦


1.《世说新语》卷下《惑溺》记:「荀奉倩与妇甚笃。冬日妇病热,乃出中庭自取冷,还以身熨之。妇亡,奉倩少时亦卒。」
2.「妻早醒,夫犹自,作梦?」化用纳兰容若的「卿自早醒侬自梦」。
Snuggling
By Hytower 2015

Who pinched the wine cup’s ears
And gave a few slaps on the two-timer’s face
Sulkily saying:“fickels!”?
In Chapter-“Luring and Drowning” of “Telling Popular Stories in New Way”,
A man called Shing Fon Chiang in Three Kingdoms period
Loved his wife
The pine needles measured in vain the depth of the snow
A palpation on the winter’s forehead told it was killing
Rushing out to fetch the iciness, the husband
Rushed back with his body to paste his wife’s
Never did they walk alone on the road both of them traveled hand in hand
Who paid attention and took a look, pointing their fingers at this and that?
How could the husband, letting his wife to wake early by herself
Kept on dreaming?

古湘新韻 發表於 2016-10-29 08:20:33

日上干頭
月猶夢乎?

高塔 發表於 2016-11-8 00:16:21

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